Not bad though. Was this from posemaniac reference? They sometimes tend to do some 'twinning' despite the dynamic element. So with every critique, people start out with 'i like _____' and '______ needs work'. Unless you're Andrew, who will start with "I don't think that's working." or "Those colors are all wrong, you're a horrible artist, and a waste of planetary resources." So if he comments, just beware, he's brutal! :)The bottom right hip feels like it should be wrapping around more, it feels flat and doesn't follow the contour. The face is a bit long, but just slightly, unless that was intentional. Hair is nice, I like the solid forms and it totally looks like it as draping onto the head, good job on that. The left knee looks like a ball of flesh, I'm thinking there's a little more going on in there.If I think of more, I'll let you know. :)Thanks for posting! I look forward to more. I'll be hitting up my drawing session again on Saturday, hopefully I'll have more. Also found some new pencil reccomendations after emailing that autodestruct digital guy. (http://autodestructdigital.blogspot.com/)
Obviously I shouldn't critique without posting some of my own work first :).