I like this version a lot. Only things I could say at the moment is maybe curve the spine back a little more? He's very straight up and down, and maybe he could use a little more weight/dynamic distribution of the chest. That is clearly more of a suggestion, because as of right now he's pretty solid. I might tilt the sword a little so it is foreshortened towards us, that way it doesn't look 'straight on'.
I like this version a lot. Only things I could say at the moment is maybe curve the spine back a little more? He's very straight up and down, and maybe he could use a little more weight/dynamic distribution of the chest. That is clearly more of a suggestion, because as of right now he's pretty solid.
ReplyDeleteI might tilt the sword a little so it is foreshortened towards us, that way it doesn't look 'straight on'.