tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3655222149212118202.post8287431775249085578..comments2010-05-24T07:20:58.418-07:00Comments on Drawrr!: Viking WIPRonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07227128878389033485noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3655222149212118202.post-78466709624384905372010-04-01T08:02:53.192-07:002010-04-01T08:02:53.192-07:00I feel like he is jumping at us, but his foreshort...I feel like he is jumping at us, but his foreshortening says otherwise. I think you flattened him out a little. (I do this ALL the time! GRR!) Also, the sword would be in a different angle in the hand (on its center axis)and the tangent between it and the edge of the page is distracting. I think his mustache is something you should try for again! :)<br /><br />Adding some stretch marks to his clothing might help emphasize his pose a bit more. Face is great. Bottom right shoe could be tilted in a little to the left to help that silhouette just a tiny bit, shape wise.Ronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07227128878389033485noreply@blogger.com